Tuesday, all my troubles seemed so far away…

back when I was on that cruise, hitting yoga every day, three massages, a facial, ionithermie for those flappy bits….Kids camp for the kiddo. Time alone. Time with hubby alone. Someone else cooking and cleaning. Books to read. Sun to soak up. We took the kiddo snorkeling, boogie boarding, and tubing for the first time. He loved all three. We loved all three.

and then we came home to five new leaks in the roof of our house including one that was spewing out an electrical socket. Bleep, Bleep, Explicative, Bleep.

We so should have had the roof repaired while we were gone but the hubby was concerned about announcing our home would be empty to a bunch of strangers who would know where we live. As opposed to you all who don’t know where we live. LOL

so while the hubby works from home to deal with that today, I am back on the normal schedule of kiddo to coop, blog work, and grocery shopping.

Thinking back on that amazing vacation, I must say I actually stopped thinking about book sales and blog posts and my virtual book tour. I barely thought about Nano which is right around the corner. I gave a little time to the niggling little nightmare that maybe, just maybe, I don’t have another book percolating in my brain. oh god, did I really write that out loud?

I’ll even shout it.

WHAT THE HELL AM I GOING TO DO IF I DON’T HAVE ANOTHER BOOK IN ME?

gulp. ok, so I said it. It’s out there. And I have to wonder, do other people feel that way? Come on, tell me I’m not alone in this. Or tell me I’m a freak. I’m a big girl I can handle it. LOL

Monday Book Review: Mystery of the Moss-Covered Mansion

I know, I know. But I was standing in the kids series section with my son helping him pick out some Star Wars and Scooby Doo books and there at eye level was a whole ton of the original Nancy Drew books. I couldn’t help myself.

If you’ve read one Nancy Drew, you’ve read them all. Really, you have.

This one is no different. Nancy is solving a case of epic proportions with her besties George and Bess. They always wear white. They always fall into mud. They always get caught and have to be rescued. They always have too much money and time on their hands. Nancy decides her dad is going to buy a house on an island in Florida at the drop of a hat, and he does.

I love the little throw backs though. Like “the base was filled with European and Asiatic visitors, Kennedy Space Center was important to the whole world.” LOL. Oh mi god. The things wrong with that sentence.  Or when they gloss over the science and call the bad guy’s weapon a “beamer.” Somehow it’s powerful enough to destroy the space shuttle from miles away, run on power from a residential neighborhood. LOL. Beamer. LOL. Oh, oh, oh, and the bad guy built a room almost completely covered in a pool of boiling water to throw trespassers in. Seriously? Luckily there was a 6 inch rim around the pool for Nancy and Ned to stand on until help arrived. ROFL.

℘℘℘℘℘ – Technically this book is a five pager as I read it in one sitting, less than 200 pages. And I do love Nancy Drew because I find them funny. But I can’t really recommend them to other people. Either you love Nancy from childhood or you will throw the book at my head if I recommend it to you. And since I just flew home with my hubby and kiddo, please, my head can’t handle any projectiles today.

Weekend Workshop Sunday Edition

We have reached the last chapter in Everyday Editing by Jeff Anderson. And here is it, the good stuff, dialogue.

-Dialogue moves the narrative along and/or reveals something about a character. (I think I’ve heard that before.) Use a distinctive voice.

-We indent every time a new person speaks. The end punctuation should go inside the quotation mark.

-Dialogue can help us show rather than tell.

-Said is NOT dead. (hrm….)

“Good dialogue encompasses both what is said and not said.” – Anne Lamott, Bird by Bird

Writers are selective, they choose to write about what is important and they edit that which does not move the story along.

Anderson makes a long an impassioned arguement in favor of “said”. He firmly believes that “said” fades into the background, it’s a nonentity in the world of dialogue tags but other words that could be substituted for “said” stand out. And you don’t want every tag to stand out. Tags should be utilitarian not art. He suggests dialogue packets- stimulus, internalization, and response, to add detail and movement and possibly leave off the tag altogether.

It’s a good arguement. One I will certainly consider at some point, possibly while I am flying home today.

Weekend Workshop Saturday Edition

Do we have chemistry? No, not me and you. Jeff Anderson from Everyday Editing, is asking about compound sentences in Chapter 9.

-Compound sentences are made when two or more sentences are combined with a comma and a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions can be remembered with the mnemonic FANBOYS: for and nor but or yet so. You can skip the coordinating conjunction if you use a semicolon (;).

Further information about the FANBOYS with a myriad of examples from Anderson and things I am currently reading.

For: connects a solution with a problem.

The dark scares us, for we don’t know what is waiting in the dark. – Alvin Schwartz, Scary Stories 3: More Tales to Chill Your Bones

And: connects two ideas that go together.

Angeline would reveal no secrets now, and Damiana would reveal no secrets later. -Sharon Shinn, The Safe-Keeper’s Secret

I think that is from a children’s book but I don’t care. I am totally intrigued and will be looking that up in the library.

Nor: negative form of or.

He left and I never saw him again, nor did I regret it. – Dictionary.com example

But: connects two ideas that go against each other.

He tried to stare into her fiery gaze, but he couldn’t stop looking at the purple vein bulging in her forehead. – Brian Meehl, Out of Patience

Or: connects two choices.

Either the killer had been too exhausted to carry the third victim all the way to the water, or he had been spooked by someone approaching and dropped his burden. – Ann Rule, Green River, Running Red

Yet: connects two ideas that go against each other.

The path was dark, yet I slowly found my way. – google search on yet

So: connects a problem with a result.

Ray Bradbury said it best: “Your intuition knows what it wants to write, so get out of the way.” – Chris Baty, No Plot? No Problem!

Like all chemistry, compounding mixes two substances(sentences) for a result which is greater than the starting. Compound away.

Monday Book Review: Shark Trouble

While reading Everyday Editing, I came across some quotes from Shark Trouble by Peter Benchley. The book sounded super intriguing and totally something I could read to my son. Well I was right on one count anyway. LOL

For a little background, Peter Benchley wrote the book Jaws. He was a struggling author desperate to hit upon an idea that would get him a book deal. His agent kept sending him on these publisher lunches (oh the days gone by when…) where you eat with a bunch of editors and chat and try to work in the ideas you have for books in the hopes that someone says yeah, I’d be interested in that. No one was ever interested in his idea about a big fish book. But he kept throwing the bait out there and eventually…well you know how that went. Book. Film. Several more books. And a few guests spots on a TV show called American Sportsman.

That’s where Benchley starts this non fiction book. He’s in a shark cage being filmed interacting with a great white, all going swimmingly, until the shark gets the rope between the cage and the boat stuck in it’s teeth and this pisses the big fish off. He leaves you at the end of the first chapter with himself realizing he needs to cut the rope or he is a dead man. Benchley has been told in advance this happens sometimes and eventually the shark will bite through the rope but if the rope doesn’t come free and the cage is still attached to the shark, the shark will swim the cage down to the bottom of the ocean and bust it to smithereens.

He leaves you hanging and goes off to discuss a lot of other things about sharks. There are chapters on the ecological significance of sharks, which sharks he thinks are dangerous and how to handle it if you meet one while swimming/diving, when you should swim and when you shouldn’t, the media frenzy around shark attacks in 2001, a tiny mistake that almost got him killed on a dive, and yes he does finally explain how he survives the cage incident.

I did have to stop reading it to the kiddo when it got bloody. And the verbiage is a bit much for a young one even in the clean sections but I am good at reading in complicated prose and spitting out simple prose for the kiddo.

℘℘℘℘ – Four pages. I read a chapter a day to the kid for the first third of the book, decided it wasn’t appropriate to him and finished off the rest in one or two goes. I thought at times Benchley is a bit preachy and repetitive but over all it makes for a great read and I know a bit about to survive a shark attack if I ever go diving and encounter one. Which won’t happen because I don’t dive and have no intention of learning to do so (having once visited a semi-loved one in a decom chamber, well no thanks).

Then again, right now I’m snorkeling in the Caribbean, so maybe this book will come in handier than I thought.

Weekend Workshop Sunday Edition

The title of Chapter 8 from Everyday Editing by Jeff Anderson is awesome. “Give me a break.” Yep and I’m taking one right now in St. Kitts.

But Anderson had another topic in mind. Paragraphs.

-Paragraphs help readers and writers chunk information together and separate it as well.

-Paragraphs may have any number of sentences. There is no rule.

-Paragraphs tend to focus on one main idea (unity), and its parts should be related (coherence).

I love this quote by Isaac Babel from Reading Like a Writer. “A new paragraph is a wonderful thing. It lets you quietly change the rhythm, and it can be a flash of lightning that shows the same landscape from a different aspect.”

I have no desire to type entire sections from novels I am currently reading to discuss why they broke things into paragraphs the way they did and I’m guessing you have no desire to read that. So let’s just say toodles here…

Weekend Workshop Saturday Edition

Greetings from the Caribbean. Today I am snorkeling with my hubby and kiddo. Which works because when I saw the title of Chapter Seven from Everyday Editing by Jeff Anderson, I was totally under water. What in the world is an appositive?

-Appositives add information to sentences by renaming nouns. The appositive should be next to the noun it is renaming. Appositives need commas or dashes to offset them from the sentence.

huh? So what is it? I think I need some examples.

Catherine the Great, my Russian grandma, is already awake. – Cari Best, Three Cheers for Catherine the Great!

ohhhhhh. I get it. Appositives relay information pertaining to the noun they apposite. Information is good.

Some further examples from Anderson, using his patented recombination method :

I watched her playing ladushky with Mimmo so he wouldn’t cry.

Ladushky is a clapping song.

The clapping song is Russian.

Combined into: I watched her playing ladushky, a Russian clapping song, with Mimmo so he wouldn’t cry.

The words become more active and the flow tighter by using the appositive. Per Anderson the description an appositive describes sharpens the image, amplifying it with new information and clarifying the meaning for the reader.

Examples from things I am currently reading….

Her mother, Nancy McIntyre, knew that Sand-e was selling herself to make enough money for that, but she couldn’t stop her. – Ann Rule, Green River, Running Red

The event grew larger still-five thousand participants the third year-and I continues to work as both director and participant. – Chris Baty, No Plot? No Problem!

All Good Things Must Come to an End-Virtual Book Tour Stop #6

Today I make my last stop on the Virtual Book Tour for the launch of Scripting the Truth. I finish my globe trotting amusement with a stop by FreeValley Publishing, a small local press cooperative devoted to independent writers.

What does FreeValley Publishing want you to know about them:

FreeValley Publishing was formed in the spirit of an arts co-op. A group of writers affiliated with SnoValley Writes! were working toward publishing and marketing their own books. While sharing experience and ideas, they realized there was much to be gained by moving forward as a group.

FreeValley encourages writers to develop and market their own work with support and advice from fellow-writers. It provides a network for promotion and interaction with our community to move toward mutual success. Our success is sharing our stories with you. Feel free to linger in the Valley and read awhile…

I’m a little sad. This tour was so much fun. And it really made me feel like I had actually published something.

And yes, I know, I did publish something but the tour made it feel real. Like a constant reliving of that first thrill when I found my proof in the mail box.

In case you are just now tuning in, stop by my first five blog stops to get the full range of excerpts available from Scripting the Truth.

The Phantom Child, Tommia’s Tablet, Dan Alatorre, Sheri J. Kennedy Riverside, Skye Hegyes. 

Wednesday Writer’s Cafe – Not

So my book came out last Friday. Yeah, me! And what does any writer worth their salt do after launching the first book they have ever published? They go on vacation. So I am gone.

While I am gone however, things will continue to tick over here. Tomorrow I will have my last Virtual Book Tour blog stop. Weekend workshops and Monday Book Reviews will continue to appear with the well oiled functionality of wordpress’s scheduling service. LOL.

I’ll tell you all about it when I get back, in time for Nanowrimo, I promise.

Virtual Book Tour Stop #5

I know, I’m posting on a Tuesday, what is that all about? It’s about my book, Scripting the Truth.

Today I pop in for a little southern hospitality at  Skye Hegyes blog. Skye is a mother, author, blogger, and creative enthusiast. She reads and writes paranormal romance and fantasy, and she absolutely loves a good love story.

If you haven’t been keeping up on my previous stops, you can check them out now. I posted a different excerpt at each stop moving through the first few chapters of Scripting the Truth.

The Phantom Child, Tommia’s Tablet, Dan Alatorre, and Sheri J. Kennedy Riverside.